Friday, 21 August 2020

my narrative

 Once upon a time it was a dark and stormy night and the thunder and the lightning grumbled the houses and the people. The ground cracked!

The next morning I woke up and saw nobody was there. I looked outside and nobody was outside. So I went for a walk to investigate. I was a survivor from the storm and then I looked around and there were two bears. One bear looked so rough and he looked like he wanted to punch me. The other bear had tattoos all over him. 

I ran and ran until I found an old home and an old bed and I hid underneath it. Then the Two Bears came to the home so I threw a bottle out the window to distract them. They ran out of the house and I burnt the house and now I have a big problem. The house I was hiding in is on fire. I sprinted back to my house and it had no water, no water so could not make the fire stop. I remembered I saw some water stored in the garage for times like this. I grabbed the water and put the fire out and was never disturbed again .

      

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