WALT: Use punctuation and write in the first person
I want to QEll, I was already in my swimming togs. I was so so so happy. I cannon balled into the deep end. I got out of the the pool and did a pencil dive then I went into the lazy river and made a bus out of the rings it was so cool.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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